The last stage

Hello guys now i bring to you my previous essay following the revising process: an important process to increase the functionality of your document.

1. First Pass: Document-level Review:

The purpose of this writing to teach you a little about the origin of technology and its highlights in history

2. Second Pass: Paragraph-level Review

3. Third Pass: Sentence-level Review

4. Fourth Pass: Word-level Review

Finished all the steps I republish my essay:

Technology

Technology is the application of knowledge, it is too broad a subject since there are many historical moments in its development such as the advances of the technological revolution, the scientific technological revolution, the facts of science, the industrial revolution, etc. 

The technology had many interesting advances, but with the discovery of oil, new inventions began, such as the creation of the combustion engine, the creation of handmade products and even electricity. The scientific revolution was characterized by the internet, robotics, studies on the human genome and inormatic developments were also developed. The most remarkable scientific facts began with the development of crops, impressions, wages and the creation of weapons. Lastly, in the industrial revolution, mass production industries such as textiles were developed, with special attention to production machines that have been faster creating products, also distinguishing political changes in society and the development of other forms of energy which are less polluting to the environment.

As you can see in this essay about technology in which there are incredible inventions and facts that developed and changed the life of society and what gives us many facilities in our lives.

And here I leave the sources that I used to do their respective review and editing:

• Style Tips: Revising to Enhance Readability.   https://pressbooks.bccampus.ca/technicalwriting/chapter/styletipsreadability/

See you soon!